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Reviews For: Dear Momma
ChaeLee0830 2009-05-03 . chapter 1
Superb. I totally got the chills. You have a way of writing that makes us, the readers, feel what you are feeling.
This poem is powerful and simple at the same time.
Thanks for taking the time to type it out here.
Noelle Clark 2008-07-01 . chapter 1
That was really amazing. I'm so sorry. Your mother sounded like a really wonderful woman.

My prayers are with you.
shootingfallingstar 2007-11-26 . chapter 1
aw
i was sobbing by the end :(
i'm sure she was overjoyed she had such a wonderful child
Teary-Eyed-Child 2007-10-01 . chapter 1
This is an extremely touching poem; I believe that it is so because you have placed so much honesty into it.
As I was reading, I had a mental image of a hand flying across paper, with a pen in hand, not taking a moment to think about the words expressed. It was as if you simply allowed your heart to speak words you had yet to express.
Wonderful job; it was a powerful and moving poem that I doubt I will forget in the near future.
Taltush/MeiMei 2007-09-05 . chapter 1
First, a small correction: "Let's" not "lets". Next, I think that punctuation would make this flow much better and significantly easier to read. Also, it's a tad bit repetitive, but that I understand. It's an incredibly intense poem and that made me feel strongly with "I". Even parts I didn't like as much still touched me. It's powerful, honest, and very touching. Overall, a very good poem.
Lady Rainwind 2007-09-05 . chapter 1
My eyes were stinging by the end. Well done!
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