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| Noelle Clark 2008-07-01 ch 1,  | abuseThat was really amazing. I'm so sorry. Your mother sounded like a really wonderful woman. My prayers are with you. |
| shootingfallingstar 2007-11-26 ch 1, | abuseaw i was sobbing by the end :( i'm sure she was overjoyed she had such a wonderful child |
| Teary-Eyed-Child 2007-10-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is an extremely touching poem; I believe that it is so because you have placed so much honesty into it. As I was reading, I had a mental image of a hand flying across paper, with a pen in hand, not taking a moment to think about the words expressed. It was as if you simply allowed your heart to speak words you had yet to express. Wonderful job; it was a powerful and moving poem that I doubt I will forget in the near future. |
| Taltush/MeiMei 2007-09-05 ch 1, | abuseFirst, a small correction: "Let's" not "lets". Next, I think that punctuation would make this flow much better and significantly easier to read. Also, it's a tad bit repetitive, but that I understand. It's an incredibly intense poem and that made me feel strongly with "I". Even parts I didn't like as much still touched me. It's powerful, honest, and very touching. Overall, a very good poem. |
| Lady Rainwind 2007-09-05 ch 1, | abuseMy eyes were stinging by the end. Well done! |