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Pyrgus 2007-11-19 . chapter 1
Aww... very nice. I especially like the last line. I love poetry that ends with a question.

It begs the question, “which ones”?

That line sounds awkward though.
Muchlove!
Pyrgus!
The-Girl-With-Two-Faces 2007-10-01 . chapter 1
I find myself relating to this poem very easily, thus making it only that much easier to enjoy. Though, I confess, I feel as if I would enjoy it nearly the same should I not find myself in such a position.
I believe that my favorite portion of this poem was the fact that you did not solely keep the reader's attention on this girl. Instead, you digress from her in order to make the reader focus on themselves, contemplating whether or not those around them recognize who they truly are, or if they are merely presenting a facade.
uskohakuchan 2007-09-25 . chapter 1
This was amazing. You have true skill. Write more soon!
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