The ending makes me want to cheer :)

Keep writing!

I'm so glad... So very glad :]

-insert enormous glomp/hug here-

good. some solid writing. here's some advice,hope its useful.

1. show, don't tell

2. pity parties only on special occations

3. vary stentence structure and word choice

4. always read your words out loud

5. a poem only pauses if there is a comma, period, etc (don't forget them, even if you are doing slam poetry)

6. details and images are very important (at least to me)

7. reading will improve your writing

8. editors are devine until #9 is completed

9. writers enjoy killing editors

hope this made you smile, keep writing

Wonderful job dear, and the sentiment was just as wonderful. Great job.

I think it's sweet, how you made this for your friend, and how this feeling and development came from what that person said. :)