"Strange as it may be
That the tattered end of your soul
Is the start of mine"

~~loved this part!! and it's the first line, so it was a wodnerufl way to open up the poem. the rest was beautiful, but this first stanza just got me. yeah, someone already brought up the little typo, so...everything else looks good to me!! keep up the lovely, prosey poetry :) it's refreshing to read this style of writing. haven't read anything real good in too long.
happy writing!

~Samantha Marie

I like the mood in this poem. One quetion: Is the line "I feel cooled in the your touch" supposed to read "I feel cooled in your touch." The "the" is just a little mistake, I presume?