Reviews for Listen to the Music

sharva-sundari
2008-05-23
ch 1,

abuseWow, this is really interesting, although some parts were kinda weird like the eagles turning into violins...? I didn't really understand why you chose eagles, because before you said dragons to butterflies ( I can see the change there), and then you said eagles to violins which made me a bit confused. Anyway, I really liked your ending. Good job. =)

kth
2007-09-08
ch 1, anon.

abuseAw... I wanna tap into that gift too! Unfortunately, either my imagination isn't that strong or my sanity isn't that weak. Oh well, anyway, a really interesting idea. I guess I never really thought about imaginary friends that much except on plane rides when I was really bored and invented random people.

I really like this line: "Her relaxed tone was more than a little annoying." It made everything a lot more realistic.

And also, when are you going to go on with VotF? I'm waiting, you know. Keep writing and update soon,
-kth

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