Great ending to a great fic.

Good

i love your story and you could definately publish it you need to write a sequal though, there are endless possibilities with wat u could do

i love this story it awsome
thanx

wow ^_^ such a nice ending...
though i must admit for a while i seemed lost because i needed to catch up from the leap between the last chapter and the precious... and then i had to remember what had happened... lol but i got it all sorted and you did good ^_^
great job and good luck for any future fictions
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Love the story, and I can't wait to read more this intresting story.

Sorry about not reviewing earlier chapters, but I was on such a roll I didn't want to stop. Um there is a few grammer and spelling isues but other than that it is a great story. I don't think I like the introduction of the aliens into it. With every other new creature your giving us I just think its too much to remember and cope with. Well that's it, happy writting.

Great chappie :D, I liked how it was all bought together with the history and how it all ties with Nicky, well keep up the good work see ya soon :P

wow that was well written... But wow... that is one very painfully sad and depressing family history... =( and then telling her she must give up her children!? nah uh! I'd just say I'll make my own destiny for a better world ^_^ or something less traumatizing ^_^ lol it would be easier to ansywer that question if we actually new what we were saving the world from... lol
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well done
update soon & good luck

I liked this chapter cause it cleared alot of things up I just find it kinda weird that she was in love with her uncle and her brother liked her... its weird.

Really good! Love it!

oh my god! BETTER THAN I THOUGHT IT COULD BE- sniflles ^_^
wow that was awesome... poor Brodie... I never thought he was particularly bad or anything... but to have such strong feelings for her was unexpected- enough to take the blow for her... aww...
OH! ^_^
YAY NATHANIEL! I KNEW YOU"D SAVE ME! ^_^ lol
just one thing i'm confused about...
WHY IS NATHANIEL A WOLF...? DID HE USE MAGIC TO TURN HIMSELF INTO A WOLF TO CONCEAL HIS IDENTITY...? I FIGURED HE'D BURST IN- THERE OFRONT OF EVERYONE, THE PRINCE OF THE ENEMY VAMPIRES AND KICK THEIR ASSES AND WE GET TO SEE THE LOOK OF SURPRISE ON THEIR FACE... BUT HE'S GOT FUR... LOL... SUCH A COOL ENTRANCE THOUGH... and NOW HE GETS A PERSONAL REASON FOR A ONE ON ONE BATTLE WITH ZACHARIAH
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WELL DONE
GOOD LUCK
HURRY AND UPDATE
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im so happy you updated, yay!! the fountain scene seemed alittle rushed, im not sure how to describe what im talking about.

I was riveted. I couldn't stop reading. Terrific, absolutely terrific story. I MUST read the rest. I want very much to know how it will end.
Jesus, talk about a cliffhanger!

Okay, constructive reviewing, there are times when there are letters missing, or whole words. And you've gotten a few expressions wrong, ex. it is supposed to be 'figment of my imagination' instead of 'figure of my imagination'.
Also you make the mistake of switching 'me' and 'my', this is actually quite a common mistake for writers. That's why we have such things as editors. Thank god!
Anyway, please go on writing, i enjoy your style. You've got a good way of describing intense emotion, a thing i always have slight difficulty with.
I've also read Literally Love Triangle, which I also desperately begged an ending for :P
You're definitely on my favorite author list.

Keep up the good work
Toi Ti

Wow, really great chapter. Full of everything that makes me adore this story. I'm so sorry it's taken me this long to read it!

Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter :)

~Carm~