this is a review for just everything you write:

you're incredible. your poetry makes me want to dance and fuck and sing and cry all at the same time (this poem especially).

you've got realreal talent; don't let it go to waste.

peace,

red.

that's an interesting story, I like the starting, the imagery are good.

That was a very disturbing poem. But very well-written. I'm not sure what to say, because I feel like anything I would say would pale in comparison to the message of the poem. Beautiful. Keep writing! :)

The power in the last three lines astounds me.