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| kloun mannequin 2007-12-04 ch 1, | abusethat's an interesting story, I like the starting, the imagery are good. |
| no.peace.los.angeles 2007-09-09 ch 1, | abuseThat was a very disturbing poem. But very well-written. I'm not sure what to say, because I feel like anything I would say would pale in comparison to the message of the poem. Beautiful. Keep writing! :) |
| she smolders 2007-09-06 ch 1, | abuseThe power in the last three lines astounds me. |