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Reviews For: This Is How I've Won

Che
2007-09-30
ch 1, anon.
abuseOh my gosh I love it! Just one thing: "Should it collapse on top me,"? I assume you mean "on top of me" but the typo jolts the reader out of the poem temporarily. And it is a jolt. Your poem is that good.
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