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| Che 2007-09-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh my gosh I love it! Just one thing: "Should it collapse on top me,"? I assume you mean "on top of me" but the typo jolts the reader out of the poem temporarily. And it is a jolt. Your poem is that good. |