|Reviews for Jealousy|
| smile for the sunshine 11/4/07 . chapter 1
I like the ending. That was my favorite part. It was nice. I kidna like this. Again, simple and short but it works. Good job!
| Pushing Daffodils 10/20/07 . chapter 1
I play bass clarinet, too! Sadly, I feel as though I may have inspired a poem like this before.
I'm sorry that you're jealous, but it's good to have a vessel to release your emotions into.
| Zeurpiet 10/8/07 . chapter 1
This produces vivid imagery and is very well written. Jealousy is an emotion we can all relate to and you did a very good job of portraying it. Keep up the good work!
| Twilight Starr 10/1/07 . chapter 1
Jealousy isn't a good emotion, but it is natural.
| found.eventually 9/22/07 . chapter 1
i guess i can relate to that poem. everyone gets jealous every once in a while, ESPECIALLY when you work really hard for something and yet other people gets the attention.
great job. :)
| Kissing Concrete 9/14/07 . chapter 1
wait... just like your pen name! ha ha... anyway, nice poem, i actually had this feeling today, (except for the dying part) when i didnt get to play in my volleyball game even though i havent missed a practice...
| kloun mannequin 9/10/07 . chapter 1
I like the flow in the poem that's dark, interesting by the way.
| nine iron 9/6/07 . chapter 1
Nice work! Its in the style I do enjoy, maybe try reading my Jelousy Haiku poems!