This was great; I think the very beginning was the best part.

Yick, I hate Halloween. What's really creepy is I'm writing all these reviews because I can't sleep and then I found your profile. You don't believe in demons?

Very nice, I really liked it. I'm going to go read more of your poems.

(And just for the record, I believe in demons, lol)

Dark in a sort of way, which I'm sure it suppose to be that way. Awesome write just the same. Write on!

Aren't holidays fun? ;]

I find myself thinking about them a lot too. I haven't been on fictionpress in a long time but I see your still writing, so I have a lot of reviewing to do.
I love this poem, the demonic side of it is amazing but it's still fun and isn't too gory or anything at all! I can't wait to see your new work and I'll start reviewing it now and writing some of my own.

Very nice. (:

I particularly like the beginning four or so lines. Especially about the butterflies. I think it gives the tone a hint of surreality.

I like the way you conclude, too.