Wonderful poem.

I like the comparison of feathers and a lover's touch. ^^

~Twilight Starr~

This is a really nice poem. In some ways it kind of reminds me of a poem that I wrote long ago called Ecstacy. But anyways, I liked your choice of words to describe the short scenario in the poem and get te gist of what you're trying to describe in it.

C.S.

Short but sweet! A lovely poem.

Rowan.

Simple while still providing good imagery. Its pleasant shortness leaves room for contemplation. Nice work.

Cute.

Love,
~Dia