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| theatrical rhapsodies 2007-10-26 ch 1,  | abuseI think this is the best poem you have poested, It just has a little something your others lack. Althhough, I do think that if you put a little more time into your writing, and maybe rewote your poems a few times and added more emotion so that we can tell how you are feeling. In this piece I would think that you were feeling angry and hurt, but its never clearly convayed in the poem. You defenetly have the petanchal to be a great writer, your ideas are good, but like I said, you just need to take your writing to the next level. =] -theatrical rhapsodies |
| XxBlackChaosxX 2007-09-07 ch 1, | abuseOoh, no more one-lines poems! Sorry, I always thought the one-liners were too sketchy. This is a definate improvement from your other poems. |