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| Green Eyed Angel 2008-07-23 ch 29,  | abuseI was re-reading it. Yep, still my fav story EVER. Really. Thank Raven for me, won't ya! |
| irispeel 2008-07-12 ch 31, | abusei absolutely adore your writing style. IMPRESSIVE. cant wait for the story on seth and trina :D |
| artimaeus 2008-07-06 ch 20, | abuseThese stories are like Cigarettes. They stink, they leave you with a nasty taste in your mouth, and you're sort of ashamed you smoke them. But I just can't stop reading. |
| Kohlomere 2008-07-05 ch 29, | abuseWoah. Mikhail is intense--spine-tingling really. This was great, keep writing! Kudos, E. |
| augustgirl 2008-06-25 ch 2, | abuse“But can Jadeite handle himself?” i really liked that line. i also enjoyed the chapter. you did a nice job of making it interesting and attention-grasping. great job. |
| augustgirl 2008-06-25 ch 1, | abusei enjoyed it. the conflict starting out the chapter was interesting and you did well establishing what close friends they are at the end. nice chapter! |
| dj 2008-05-23 ch 30, anon. | abuseheu this story was great! cant wait for trina and seths! the best thing in the whole story is the personalities! they are very realistic...it's like yor not trying to sugar coat the truth and i complement you on your achievment...excuse my spelling... hope you put the first chapter soon best of luck ~i was bornbrilliant but education ruined moi ;p |
| love in the air 2008-03-29 ch 29, anon. | abuseWoW! thats all i can say 4 this story. its nothing short of awesome. i also luv how u keep the characters in role. :) |
| slightlyaddictedx3 2008-03-25 ch 30, | abusewow iloveyuursotry; and i cant wiat to read trina&seth's story |
| slightlyaddictedx3 2008-03-25 ch 16, | abuseThe next day, Sunday, came later than expected. I guess I was more exhausted than I’d thought. The morning went by quickly, and Trina dropped me off at home. She hadn’t said a word about her little plan at all. It kind of irked me that she didn’t want to tell me the guys she ways considering, but I figured she’d tell me when the time was right. So I let it pass. you need to change ways to was |
| PrincessNancy 2008-03-16 ch 1, | abuseHey, I actually signed up after reading your story, it got me completely hooked! I sorta wanted Seth and Aria to end up together.. they were so amazing! Well, I'm looking forward for Seth and Trina's story.. What'll eb the title? When will you be posting it? I'm completely dying to know what'll happen... XoXo NAN. |
| koerle 2008-03-04 ch 30, | abuseVery nice preview. Can't wait to read more! |
| koerle 2008-03-04 ch 29, | abuseWhat a cute story!! Aria and Mikhail are really cute together!! But I have to admit that I feel sad for Seth. He was such a wodnerful guy, always looking out for Aria. Trying to prevent her from being hurt. And what does he get in return? I hope Trina and Seth's story does have something nice for the guy... he so deserves it. |
| koerle 2008-03-04 ch 25, | abuseHm... now she has 2 incredibly hot guys kissing her. I feel bad for Seth, he is bound to be hurt. And why do they both seem so perfect for her? Great chapter! |
| koerle 2008-03-04 ch 21, | abuseThis story really has a great built up story line! The last chapter ended with raging teen emotions, just as this one does. Great chapter!! |