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| Definition 2007-09-17 ch 1,  | abuseNice. The physical image of this haiku is very strong, especially with 'withering'. I also love the idea of how you compare death to snow cherries...very ethereal-like. |
| sleeping Pisces 2007-09-11 ch 1, | abuseNice touch on the format here. The imagery in this haiku is particularly strong, possibly (or probably) because of the way in which 'withering' is written. Well thought out haiku. |
| Kusje 2007-09-11 ch 1, | abuseHaha, the last line made me so happy. It's the title to Dir en Grey's album. But to move on... The middle line was very well fitting -- It made the poem more artistic, and it's like I could actually taste the 'snow cherries'. 'beautiful tempest' Superb! |
| Basara 2007-09-11 ch 1, | abusesweet taste of death... nice... |
| tearing hands 2007-09-08 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. I love how "withering" actually looks like it's withering. |
| Kadence 2007-09-08 ch 1, | abuseMhm! This is great, and I normally don't read poetry...:) Can't wait to see more. D.C. |
| Thenardier 2007-09-08 ch 1, | abuseI absolutely adored the imagery here. Fantastic |
| x.Insanely Serene.x 2007-09-07 ch 1, | abuseaww, that was really super cute... && really deep, great job |