Nice. The physical image of this haiku is very strong, especially with 'withering'. I also love the idea of how you compare death to snow cherries...very ethereal-like.

Nice touch on the format here. The imagery in this haiku is particularly strong, possibly (or probably) because of the way in which 'withering' is written. Well thought out haiku.

Haha, the last line made me so happy. It's the title to Dir en Grey's album. But to move on...

The middle line was very well fitting -- It made the poem more artistic, and it's like I could actually taste the 'snow cherries'.

'beautiful tempest' Superb!

sweet taste of death...

nice...

Beautiful. I love how "withering" actually looks like it's withering.

Mhm! This is great, and I normally don't read poetry...:) Can't wait to see more.

D.C.

I absolutely adored the imagery here. Fantastic

aww, that was really super cute...
&& really deep, great job