 Definition 2007-09-17 . chapter 1Nice. The physical image of this haiku is very strong, especially with 'withering'. I also love the idea of how you compare death to snow cherries...very ethereal-like. |
 Dale Christopher 2007-09-11 . chapter 1Nice touch on the format here. The imagery in this haiku is particularly strong, possibly (or probably) because of the way in which 'withering' is written. Well thought out haiku. |
 Kusje 2007-09-11 . chapter 1Haha, the last line made me so happy. It's the title to Dir en Grey's album. But to move on...
The middle line was very well fitting -- It made the poem more artistic, and it's like I could actually taste the 'snow cherries'.
'beautiful tempest' Superb! |
 Basara 2007-09-11 . chapter 1sweet taste of death...
nice... |
 tearing hands 2007-09-08 . chapter 1Beautiful. I love how "withering" actually looks like it's withering. |
 idream 2007-09-08 . chapter 1Mhm! This is great, and I normally don't read poetry...:) Can't wait to see more.
D.C. |
 Thenardier 2007-09-08 . chapter 1I absolutely adored the imagery here. Fantastic |
 x.Insanely Serene.x 2007-09-07 . chapter 1aww, that was really super cute...
&& really deep, great job |