Reviews for left in ruins - FictionPress.com

Tearlit 2008-04-22 ch 1,	abuseOk I lied before. This is my favorite. _ I love the images it creates in my head and how there is no punctuation or capitalization. I can somehow relate to this and I like that. I think my favorite part is the last 4 lines, where she doesn't care what it does to her because it feels good and that past and future don't matter - all she's focused on is the here and now. Lovely lovely job!! ~Meg
boys kiss girls 2007-12-19 ch 1,	abuseI like the poem and how creative it was, but at the same time it reminds me a lot of this girl, Trinity, in my class who smokes and is too loud and talks about nothing in particular. Her hair is orange and curly.
thestonedfox 2007-09-07 ch 1,	abuseI loved this! I like how everything seemed so well-thought and well-placed. The image of the little girl as someone innocent ("she sits so pretty") and then that image twisted 2 lines later, the irony and the selfishness and oh, I love love love how you didn't place any articles before the words cigarette and red bull- it makes them sound like persons, friends or confidants instead of lifeless objects, completing the image of someone who is blindly, foolishly dependent on them. And now you've got me writing in run-on sentences! (that is always a good thing) Like I said, I loved this. :)