Reviews for Missing: Lost & Found

mysticfox19 2008-06-12 ch 3,	abuseGood chapter, but my problem is SFA is in Nacogdoches not Austin.
misssweetsweet 2008-04-29 ch 10,	abuseJust so you know, the count of first degree murder carries the death penalty in Texas. Along with all the other charges that he had incurred, Juan should have, legally, been put to death. You also should take this story down and have it proofread because it is rife with grammatical errors. Other than that, this is a good story.
awritingfantasy 2008-03-05 ch 10,	abuseHey, I think I read this one on TST Board, great story and I enjoyed the idea and plot you provided. Keep up the good work on the other stories you have posted on the Board. :o) Ronnie
antisocial extrovert 2007-10-02 ch 1,	abuseI just read the first chapter, and I have to say that it's really good. I can't believe no one's reviewed it yet. The only thing that I could suggest for constructive criticism is that you re-read or get a beta to check for grammar, but even that is a just minor error. For example, instead of "were", you used "where"(that's it). And this is coming from a grammar freak (I'm one of those types of people who'll stop reading a story if it has bad grammar). Other than that, this story is amazing. I love your writing style and you're descriptive which is always good. I can't wait to read the rest of the story (which, I'm going to do after I finish this review), and read your other stories as well. I believe you have a real talent for writing. - Jasmine