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stop-drop-and write 2009-05-14 . chapter 11
this is so frikin' hilarious! I love this story, even if it is completely random. And by the way, the plot is kind obvious, but even more so by the title. The second I read 'my own wings', I kinda figured Lexie would be a superhero too. but humor is supposed to be obvious, that is what makes it awesome. so a gazillion thumbs up! :)
candii-apple 2009-01-23 . chapter 11
hi!! -looks guilty for taking so long to review- aw... poor charlie, having his entire family forget his existence.. at least he has matt and lexie *nods* cute chapter =] LOL at charlie's declaration of love and lexie remembering it for the rest of her life xD it doesn't say complete so i'm guessing there's going to be more?? update soon! [and i promise not to take this long to review again ^^"]
x.ayame.x 2009-01-06 . chapter 11
*sigh* Sorry I took to long to review. but YAY! YOU UPDATED. you really should update again. =)

and yay! She's a vowel now! That's so cool! ^_^

Anyway, I think there's just that one bit, when you go from the erasing the family's minds bit to the Lexie's friends asking what's wrong was a bit confusing for me, coz it's kind of abrupt and I thought it was the same bit coz of the lack of a line. ^^"

but other than that, there's nothing much to say. good job. ^^
Hyperactive Tirlis 2008-11-05 . chapter 11
Oh woot. XD

Lynn...you dodgy one. Iaethia? Geez. But then again...for the memory thing not to work...I guess she would have special powers. Work on your inconspicious-ness more Linni.

Overall, pretty good. I like it! But it isn't as humour-filled as your other chapters. Oh well. Goes to show that you should write more often instead of switching between comics and writing. *nods*

Anyways, keep updating!
destiny.X.fate 2008-11-04 . chapter 11
LYN! I LOVE THAT STORY! *SQUEALS* IT'S SO OMGOSH! WAH! IT'S SO SWEET! IT'S SO CUTE! I KNEW SHE WAS IAETHIA! WAH! YOUR STORY IS UBER AWESOME! ^_^ LOL, IS THERE GONNA BE ANOTHER CHAPTER? IT'S SO GOD!

LOVE FROM SISTER B
Killer Threat 2008-11-04 . chapter 11
is this the ending? o.o; or is there more? because iwanna read more :D
sister B 2008-10-24 . chapter 10
SISTER A! HI!

lol, i cbb logging in.

anyways, WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE YOUR STORY AGAIN??! lol, i've read this story so many times already XD!! It's SO CUTE! AND SWEET!

oh, and its UBER FUNNY! XD (its a compliment)

PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY ASAP! XD
Misheru 2008-08-29 . chapter 10
ARGH LYN HURRY AND UPDATE PLEASE. GRANDMA SAYS SO! :D Very proud to have such a skilled grandaughter

Misheru
destiny.X.fate 2008-07-12 . chapter 10
OMGosh!

I LOVE YOUR STORIES! XD

KEEP UPDATING!

and and and... WAH SHE CAN'T LOSE HER MEMORY!!

LOVE YOUR STORIES.

note - words are written in capitals to EMPHASIZE not just emphasize XD
Erulyn 2008-03-08 . chapter 10
Woah...Lynn...another great update...

Bwhahaha...she bit him...and so...? YOU HAVE MADE UP VOCAB TOO! LIKE ACHAELIUS! That is so made-up...

Go the green fire! Lose your memory!
candii-apple 2008-02-29 . chapter 10
lmao - 'pyromaniac' love that line xD OMG! he can't erase her memory >__< then she'll forget him and they'll have to break up and *sobsob* that's so sad >_< (i sound like a total bimbo now T_T) yay! update =)keep updating! -grins-
x.ayame.x 2008-02-24 . chapter 10
NO!!
wah.
her memory
>_
candii-apple 2008-01-01 . chapter 9
OMG! -goes and grabs a baseball bat so I can bash the crap out of those evil men who made her lose her headband- xD yay! you updated =) write another chapter soon!! i'll die of the suspense! [btw, i saw you today at towers! well, im kind of stating the obvious but yeah... i'll shut up now ^^]
Rynx-too-genki 2007-12-31 . chapter 9
wierd chapter... but good in a way. Things are going to get interesting!

Update soon!
sky written 2007-12-26 . chapter 9
Sister A! You're not dead! Anymore. =]

Gosh, I hope no one reads this review. Otherwise that first line is going to make them think I'm a freaky stalker person. I'm not a freaky stalker person, right, Sister A?

Whee, kidnapping! And freaky people! I swear I'm okay. Medicine-induced catatonia will make someone a little... eh... weird. XD Violence against women? So this is set in Australia, right? And me likey last line. Yay, I like chapter.

Um, you're missing a 'u' in one of the swearwords, though. Or was that on purpose? If it is, forget I said that. And ooh, author's note says you're writing webcomics! (jumps up and down) Can I read?

And Merry Christmas. =] I was going to wish you one yesterday, only you barred me... (feels unloved).
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