Reviews for Sumikochan in Twisted Land

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Silverslade 2008-05-17 ch 6,	abuseThis was another great chapter. I was looking forward to seeing what exactly Warashii had caused by attacking Shiba, and well, it caused something big and exciting. I wonder where that leaves her now. Her mentioning of the dark prince and princess is something else to look forward on of top Sumiko's race against time. I liked the fact that all characters got the opportunity to reveal a little more of themselves in this chapter, well maybe except the enigma that is Polkihol. And with the introduction of the new character, things got even more interesting. I look forward to the next update.
Shameful-Envy 2008-05-13 ch 2,	abuseTwisted Land sounds an interesting land so far. I would like to see what really is really out there when I finally get to read it... whenever that may be. (xPP) This first chapter, it was hard to grasp any of your characters. Fria and Polkhiol I got something out, but Sumiko is my least favorite. She seems to be really out there and isn't intact with reality. I mean, she obviously knows that she is in a different place and yet she isn't frightened at first, nor is she too shock. She certain did demand to go home, but it didn't feel that she wanted to go home. The beginning of this chapter was really dragging, but at the end of this chapter, I finally think you got something going really. Sumiko still contiunes to be my least favorite. xDD lol Her personality is rather dull. =.= Something that bothered me especially in this first chapter: Although he did not remove his hat, which seemed rude at the time and Sumiko couldn’t help but feel a little offended, but at least he bowed nonetheless. I wonder why a Japanese person would even think this when taking off the hat is considered a polite way in the West. In the East, bowing is the only polite way to greet another being. Unless the world she is from is an alternate universe Earth, then I guess it is all right. But still, her name is Japanese and her culture is Japanese. Depending on the way he bowed spoke of his politeness towards her. That's one of the mistakes I believe you made when you wrote this part of the chapter. Otherwise, I look forward to read the rest of the chapters to determine the characters themselves because even if you did give a characterization of them, I still couldn't fully grasp them. I hope that the future chapters I will read will give me more characterization of them. Or else, we may have a problem here. xDD lol I invest a lot of my time simply about the characters because they are what make the story and makes the plot of the story move. =33 They are the life of your story after all. =D Hope to read more, Shameful Envy
Tragedy of Light and Dark 2008-05-07 ch 6,	abuseAwesome chapter! Too bad I have to wait a month for another one cries Update sooner damn it!
Kurogane Black Ninja 2008-05-07 ch 6,	abuseAnother series? Do you plan on posting it here soon? I really like your series and I'd definitely be interested in reading anything that you write. As for the story- Shiba's death was grand and I like the way you portrayed the destruction of the Tree of Darkness. You write scenes like that very well. This chapter was very action-packed. I can't wait until you update again and maybe if I ask really nicely it'll be less then a month begs
Kurogane Black Ninja 2008-05-07 ch 5,	abuseLooks like Shiba is dead now. I wonder what this means since the Tree of Darkness is a vital entity in Twisted Land.
SilverIsamu 2008-05-07 ch 6, anon.	abuseKanako sounds like a pretty character. I wonder what this means for the cast?
HFGLF 2008-05-07 ch 5, anon.	abuseReview for Chapter 6 This was a short, yet interesting chapter. So much happened here but you made it flow in a way that makes since. Shiba's death was semi-touching and it seems that Warashii's motives are clear now. Polkhiol is a character that seems much like an overseer here. I think he knows exactly what's going on and I wouldn't doubt if he wasn't leading Sumiko on. As to what he's leading her on to, I have no idea but I think it's something really important that we'll only find out by the end of the story. Fria seems special in some way as well and their meeting was definitely fated from the beginning. The conversation between Polkhiol and Fria towards then end explained a lot of how their pillar system worked. I'm glad to finally find something out after being intrigued for many chapters. This was a good read. Too bad I have to wait a month to get another chapter.
Dark Kurogane 2008-05-07 ch 6, anon.	abuseI think Shiba recognized Sumiko. That's really strange. I wonder what it means exactly. Too bad Shiba died like that. I really liked her character. I guess now the cast are in for it.
Utena Himemiya 2008-05-07 ch 6, anon.	abuseThis is a nice touch. I definitely like this chapter, no matter if it's short or not. I think I should enjoy this length of chapters considering they'll get longer if I know you right. I do think that something is definitely up with Polkhiol and I have a feeling that he knows a lot more then he's saying. I can't say much about Kanako because she came in on the last part of the chapter but she seems interesting. I also wonder about Fria and her visit to Chizeta. What will happen when she goes there, I wonder?
Yaoi Love-Love Girl 2008-05-07 ch 6, anon.	abuseOoh, new cast member! I wonder what she'll be like? You have me wondering and when will we get to meet the Dark Prince and Princess? I want to know what they are like.
Iruka-sama 2008-05-07 ch 6, anon.	abuseKanako looks interesting enough. I wonder what will happen with er character. This looks great! Keep up the good work!
Iruka-sama 2008-05-07 ch 5, anon.	abuseThis chapter was definitely not as it seemed. It's very interesting how you do such wonderful things with your characters.
Iruka-sama 2008-05-07 ch 4, anon.	abuseI wonder what will happen with Polkhiol now...I'm also really interested in what Warashii's motives are as well.
SilverIsamu 2008-04-17 ch 5, anon.	abuseI wonder what Warashii has planned andI hope Shiba doesn't die.
HFGLF 2008-04-16 ch 5, anon.	abuseI think the fact that Warashii stated that something was up beforehand ruined the suprise factor in the later part of your chapter. Other then that it flowed pretty smoothly. Also, you don't have to take Nutritional's review as anything really. They seem to be showing what they truly are and I, too have seen their reviews and they do nothing but shred people down so ignore them. Your characters are not Mary Sues or I would not be reading your works.

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