I'm glad it ended happily, Adam and Melanie finally ended up together. This was one of my favorite stories to follow/read. I might read Ronnie's story too.

thank you! And I think it ended perfectly.

:D
yay cant wait for the sequel.
man i've been into this story for a long time & im glad to see it finished a bit sad tho :\ yeh and adam is def my ideal man too =D

SO AMAZING!
i loved this story. so good. =)

i really love your story. there will still be a next chapter after this, right? i just cant wait for the next one. nd i dont really want it to end, not yet.
keep up the good work, i really admire you with this kind of story.

I think this was my favorite chapter, because mel and adam got togother but what i dont get is, didnt derek hate mina? Oh well i still liked it. But what was her dision when she was going to go talk to derek? Was she going to breck up with him? Or stay with him? Oh and i so totally have a Darth Vader t-shirt to. Lol.

I'm glad they kissed again!!

It may not have been the best time (Adam can't be a rebound, even though we all knew they'd be together anyways), but if it didn't happen then, it would have taken forever to actually happen!

Are they actually going to sleep together? Or just make out?

I'm sure I'll figure out next chapter!
(love it, by the way)

Your going to be an amazing author someday (Y)
i love this story & adam i love him so much hes nice & hes hot & im so happy this worked out!! =)
cant wait for the next chapter..
man i wish adam was real! he seems actually 2 perfect.
& i was so expecting that from Derek!
xx

Ah... it's about time those two got together... FINALLY! yay

oh my gosh! A double update! And right before my birthday. That defiantley makes me happy. Well that and that the twilight movie is coming out friday but enough blabbering I love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love this though I only read chapter 29 but i was so excited that I had to review before I even read the chapter so thank for updating!

OMG i am so happy that you updated...derek is gone and so is ronnie well relationship wise, now adam and mel can get together...YAH

there abouts to sleep together, i think it's a lil weird but i likes it...lol

update supers super soon!1

~abby~

All I can say is wow . . .

Though it is a little strange that Mel was so willing to sleep with Adam, and with Derek the thought didn't even cross her mind.

Oh my gosh i loved it! it was so amazing and exactly what i wanted to happen! I'm almost in love with this story so you better update soon or else my heart will break. and we wouldnt want that to happen so i love it!

loved this chapter i thought it was really kool and to tell you the truth i think mel should end up with adam cause they both like each other. but what i dont understand is why adam is still with ronnie when we all no that he likes mel? oh well ill just have to wait keep writing cause its getting good ^-^

What the hell was that? They finally kiss and she ends up running away? Why can't she see that she and Adam clearly belong together?