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| Alenor 2007-11-24 ch 23,  | abusehmm...it's interesting. but i wanna know why trish is different since she's been to vermont. or at least, i'm assuming that she's been there or something like that. cya later ~ Alenor. |
| Seisaset 2007-10-20 ch 23, | abuseoo i definantly like this. usually i would complain the chapters are too short but it fits well with the story and you update so often :) |
| Renzie 2007-10-02 ch 23, | abuseWe finally learn his name :D Continue! |
| Scott 2007-10-02 ch 20, anon. | abuseI think this story sucks - no one gives a - about a pretty blad kid in turtle necks I mean cmon?! And whats up with that annoying girl! Give some respect to your parents kid! WTF this story sucks learn to write!!@@!@#~@#! I mean in all if I had to rate it out of 10 I would give it a 7! you know why? because you turn it around and its a L for LOSER! AHAHAHA! Go back to Kindergarden!@#!@!#!# Love, Scott PS. I'll write a real review later. Keep writing. :P |
| Renzie 2007-09-22 ch 20, | abuseYay, I loved it again :) Cute when he moved to her aisle. Keep writing! |
| somuchformyhappyending 2007-09-22 ch 20, | abuseaww...I really liked this chapter! bec |
| Renzie 2007-09-16 ch 17, | abuseOkay, I'm finished. I really like this story! I checked it on my Story Alert, so please continue writing :) Your style is great. |
| Renzie 2007-09-16 ch 15, | abuseLove the last line. |
| Renzie 2007-09-16 ch 13, | abuseSo yea, he's mute. All his paragraphs make me so sad. Hopefully he'll look at her again and she'll look back, and they won't be able to take their eyes off each other. Because sometimes you don't have to speak to make someone aware of you/attracted to you(which seems to be the case here). |
| Renzie 2007-09-16 ch 12, | abuseHey. Just stopped to review again. I really like the pace of this story :) Thinking that the boy's mute, though I guess I'll find out more. |
| Renzie 2007-09-16 ch 6, | abuseWoah, I loved that last paragraph. So great. It sucks that this hasn't gotten any more reviews, it definitely should. I'm gonna continue reading this tomorrow |
| Kid In Converse 2007-09-14 ch 14, | abuseThis is a really cool idea! I really like the style that you're writing it in. Are his narrations suppose to be like journal entries? You can also work on showing us, not telling us more. Anyway, awesome work! Please continue, and Post More Soon! :-) |
| Lauren Guttman 2007-09-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseAwesome story so far... oh Trish and the guy are falling for eachother. lol...I can't wait till they actually speak to eachther (if they ever do) |
| lupine-eyes 2007-09-08 ch 1, | abuseA sad little story, but good. You can feel the sorrow in it, and yet the releif of being alive, if speechless. |