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J
2007-09-12
ch 1, anon.
abusehmm.. :narrows eyes at you:
so whats on your mind eh?

nice,
i liked it.
keep writing.

completely stop consuming all forms of caffiene and see if it helps the sleep situation at ALL..
if that doesnt work you can call me and ill tell you my life story untill you fall asleep.

oh yes.
and quit smoking, **.

ily.
Rachelll
2007-09-11
ch 1, anon.
abuseas I was reading this, I started sing-song-ing..it.. XD... I dunno, I liked it though o.o
Amorelle
2007-09-10
ch 1,
abuseaww he seems so sad *hugs the narrator*
Choke on this
2007-09-08
ch 1,
abusei like it. i like how the repetition emphasizes the feelings of resentment in the poem.
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