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| ick 2008-06-11 ch 14, anon. | abuseAw... and I had such high hopes for Val--then she gives in for just a kiss. I'd be ** as hell at Jack; what right does he have to barge in and start demanding things. I had hoped that he would be a bit more contrite and that she would have a bit more backbone. Good story, though, but I really can't stand pushover female leads that just kind of forget everything at the touch of their 'true love's' lips. It's vomit-inducing. |
| dawn's unforgiving darkness 2008-05-17 ch 20,  | abusethis story was so cute! |
| PrincessNancy 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abuseCLAVIE!! HA! Nice finding you on FP! :D YAY!! lol First the other site for ebooks, and now here.. YAY! Hmm.. Got any new MC books? XoXo NAN! |
| Gentle. Edge. 2008-03-17 ch 20, | abuseThat's so sweet. Really awesome job :) |
| Gentle. Edge. 2008-03-17 ch 2, | abuseI like how the story's going except Jack and Val are kinda... dramatic for my tastes. They both don't believe in love at first sight, yet they're all "I love him/her" or whatever. It seems a bit unreal... but I can't wait to read more about Max. He seems like a good guy. |
| Gentle. Edge. 2008-03-17 ch 1, | abuseThis first chapter actually sounds like a one shot or something so it's kinda weird but I can't wait to read more. But I bet Max is Jack's uncle! ;) |
| Faith Adeline 2008-02-09 ch 20, | abusethis was a cute story. I really enjoyed it. Lynie was a great character, she made me laugh :) Great work! Faith |
| Carmel March 2008-02-04 ch 20, | abuseEven though it's been awhile since I've been on Fictionpress, I've definitely not forgotten this story. I loved it, and I'm sort of sad that it's finished. It's this kind of story that keeps me coming back for more. I hope to see more from you soon :) ~Carm~ |
| sudi 2008-01-27 ch 20, anon. | abuseA really nice story, thank u I've read most of your stories, they're all very good but I think this one is by far the best, Good luck with your other stories |
| Xuewen 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuseI love this. (: |
| irispeel 2008-01-08 ch 20, | abusehey, that was a nice story. i especially like 'lynie'. haha. she depicts the true intelligence of kids. |
| emerald 2008-01-06 ch 20, anon. | abuse*smile* Perfect, just perfect. I really enjoyed reading this story! |
| Volo Purus. 2008-01-04 ch 20, | abuse:* I love it. |
| jekodama 2007-12-31 ch 20, | abuseAw! So cute! And they finally gave Lynie a little baby brother (or sister)! I have to admit, at first I was really angry with you for the way you had handled the thing after Max's death and all, but you really managed to keep me reading, although I didn't want to, and I'm glad I did. Congrats for a very good story! |
| Lady R 2007-12-31 ch 20, | abuseAnd so a happily ever after...sigh. I could read this story over and over again. I just love your stories!! I just love Val's line, "you live here". That just cracked me up. Can you do a story about Lynie all grown up? I'm going to miss her the most! Can't wait to read you next story. Happy New Year! |