omg wat a beautiful story!

it's my favourite out of all yours ive read so far

wonderful! simply spectacular!

i thought it was 20 chap so it was going to be a bit rushed with where the plot line was heading but it turned out to be paced extremely well and nothing went too fast

loved it!

Sweet simple ending.

Daddy? Was that there last chapter?

Ah I was actually right. Wow.

For some reason... I kinda think Jack IS the nephew..

At first I thought this story was going to be like your other story. Um. 'With you' i think? It started the same and it was a bit unoriginal and when I read it I was going to stop reading after that part of offering her to get married but I read on and luckily it turned out to have a different twist and setting to the other story which I am very much glad for. Anyway, thought I should mention that you should indicate when you change points of view, even though it was fairly obvious when the perspective changed in this chapter.

Aw... and I had such high hopes for Val-then she gives in for just a kiss. I'd be pissed as hell at Jack; what right does he have to barge in and start demanding things. I had hoped that he would be a bit more contrite and that she would have a bit more backbone. Good story, though, but I really can't stand pushover female leads that just kind of forget everything at the touch of their 'true love's' lips. It's vomit-inducing.

this story was so cute!

CLAVIE!

HA! Nice finding you on FP! :D

YAY! lol First the other site for ebooks, and now here.. YAY!

Hmm.. Got any new MC books?

XoXo

NAN!

That's so sweet. Really awesome job :)

I like how the story's going except Jack and Val are kinda... dramatic for my tastes. They both don't believe in love at first sight, yet they're all "I love him/her" or whatever. It seems a bit unreal... but I can't wait to read more about Max. He seems like a good guy.

This first chapter actually sounds like a one shot or something so it's kinda weird but I can't wait to read more. But I bet Max is Jack's uncle! ;)

this was a cute story. I really enjoyed it. Lynie was a great character, she made me laugh :) Great work!

Faith

Even though it's been awhile since I've been on Fictionpress, I've definitely not forgotten this story. I loved it, and I'm sort of sad that it's finished. It's this kind of story that keeps me coming back for more.

I hope to see more from you soon :)

Carm

A really nice story, thank u

I've read most of your stories, they're all very good but I think this one is by far the best,

Good luck with your other stories