Reviews for One Hundred Miles

simpleplan13 2007-12-10 ch 1,	abusethis is so sweet and being in a long distance relationship for almost three years I can totally relate... I love the phrase "100 lethal miles" that was so great.. and the line about your tears mingling with his empty shirt was awesome as well
Larentia 2007-09-08 ch 1,	abuseMy boyfriend lives 1,200 miles away.
An Inside Joke 2007-09-08 ch 1,	abuseVery heartfelt. Try to keep your rhyme scheme standard rather than switching it around. This seemed like a very heartfelt poem (like I said before), but the emotion was very straight-forward. Perhaps you could add more layers and sublties (sorry, can't spell) in later versions/new poems.
Scorpius Malfoy 2007-09-08 ch 1,	abuseThis honestly sounded more like prose than poetry. The lines were unnecessarily long. Try to cut out filler words- when you cut out the filler, it brings power to your more active words. Print off your poem and cross out everything that isn't a noun, verb, or adjectives. Those are your points. Find the shortest possible way to connect them. If you find that the words on their own aren't powerful enough, grab a thesaurus, but don't go too crazy.