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| sapphirehearts 2008-07-22 ch 15, | abuseIntense. It's good to start hearing about their past. It's interesting. Can't wait for more! |
| Petals of Paranoia 2008-07-13 ch 15, | abuseAw, I'm kind of disappointed I didn't get to see Allister and Candy eat lunch with them. But oh well, maybe some other time. I am glad that I learned more about the whole Halflings thing. This curse sounds interesting, I can't wait to learn more! |
| K.P. Crest 2008-07-13 ch 15, | abuseahh, i wish you would write more! and we should totally hang out!! do you know who i am? hmm? yeah, keep guessing...oh, i'm supposed to review, aren't i? well then, it was great, so write more please! |
| inuyasha finatic 2008-07-12 ch 15, | abusethat was awsome and great update soon |
| Dellarose 2008-06-10 ch 14, | abuseAwesome! This really isn't the cliche vampire story, so I demand you change your title! (Kidding. ^-^) It's very good, and I'm geting really into it, so I do hope you're one for updating VERY quickly. Excellent work! |
| Petals of Paranoia 2008-06-10 ch 14, | abuseThat thing with Lucas was definitely weird. And not so much him tackling her and cuddling with her, but his reaction to Alphonse's teasing. And my heart just goes out to Incubus. He's had such a big day, and then it ends with that. I'm almost positive that he has feelings for Lisette now. And I can't wait for that lunch at school! That's bound to be interesting! |
| inuyasha finatic 2008-06-10 ch 14, | abuseOMG That was really good update soon please! |
| sapphirehearts 2008-06-09 ch 14, | abuseO! This is getting really good! I can't wait for more! I totally love it! --Meg |
| KaronePrincess 2008-06-05 ch 13, | abuseHey, I'm so glad that you updated! WOW...what a small world. Incubus finally meet Molly. I don't know how he feel. He must felt very excited yet afraid at the same time. Lucus, he seems dark. I mean he's not dark like bad guy, what I meant is he not happy as his other two brothers. As far as I know he got cursed. What kind of cursed? Is it that no one love him? Or he can't be love? Or he couldn't love? It's very interesting when I read about other vampires reveal more about the Roseblood brothers. Their father is the strongest vampire ever, right. They are afraid if one the three brothers love someone one then? What will happen? I so thrill to read more. Lucas burned all Incubus Mooly letters and photos. At first I thought it quite harsh, but that's the best for Incubus, heal his pain. Please write more. I really love to read the story to finish. Thank you very much! Nice day, KaronePrincess |
| Petals of Paranoia 2008-05-30 ch 13, | abuseSo something happened to Lucas, something that isolated him from his brothers? That's definitely interesting, though not surprising. I'm still wondering about how Incubus feels about Lisette. At some points in this chapter he said he thought of her as a sister, but at other points it seemed like more. I can't wait to read more and find out! |
| It's ferosh. 2008-05-25 ch 8, | abuseOH NOES ! Allister is thinking the wrong thing x']. Mweh I do hope that Lucas and Lisette go out. I think they're a quite cute couple. |
| sapphirehearts 2008-05-24 ch 13, | abuseAh! It was perfect. Can't wait for more! --Meg |
| Petals of Paranoia 2008-04-28 ch 12, | abuseWow, that's interesting that Lisette had known Molly. Speaking of which, I'm guessing that this is now, finally, the ending of this part of the story. Not that I didn't enjoy it, I'm just tired of being wrong about when the Molly thing ends. This was mostly an Incubus chapter, which is cool, but I really want to see what's going to happen between Allister and Lisette. And I was wondering, does Incubus really have feelings for Lisette? Maybe a little more than platonic? |
| urbanfictionalist 2008-04-27 ch 12, | abusei liked it i cant wait 4 ur next update |
| sapphirehearts 2008-04-27 ch 12, | abuseAw! Poor Incubus! That was so sad! |