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| AK the Twilight 2008-05-27 ch 1, | abuseYou have a real knack for making rhyme schemes work and this is a glorious example of why. Your imagery is sharp and grandiose and the words glow with brilliantly tangible pictures. The concept of a storm is so vivid and real. I did find the storytelling aspect of it to be a tad cliche, but I quickly got lost in the sheer realism and might of your imagery. Overall, I really like this. It's a definite example of great imagery and is worth a read. Regardless of its supposed age, this still manages to be a grand read. Keep up the fantastic work. |
| Thenardier 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseI feel immense sadness somehow. Like recalling a distant memory, never to again see this wonderful isle you so beautifully portrayed. |
| Iccle Fairy 2007-09-16 ch 1, | abusefantastic descriptions, just wonderful! very enjoyable to read! ~*~ |
| EternallyImperfect 2007-09-08 ch 1, | abuseLovely! I'm adding you to my Favorites List! |
| pureJoy 2007-09-08 ch 1, | abuseOkay you recently said one of my poems was 'enchanting'. And I can not think of any better word for this poem than that. This is an absolutely amazing, enchanting poem. Beautiful!! |