|Reviews for Contained|
| Kissing Concrete 10/6/07 . chapter 1
this is very beautiful. i love the way you phrase your words, and the very order you put them in make them more meaningful. the way you made use of periods was very creative, i've never seen anything like it before. i can totally picture a certain piece on deviant art that totally goes with this peom. nice job!
| shadow-of-a-trackless-sea 9/8/07 . chapter 1
Oh Hun, I feel like that all the time too.
| whispered something profound 9/8/07 . chapter 1
aw im sorry. i feel like that too sometimes except instead of god maybe a parent or something.