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| Sarah (Thing 1) 2007-09-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love you two. And you DO need more photographs, because I have only one of you two together - and it's one that Lea took. So I demand more photographs so I can hang them up on my wall and show my lovely friends off. |
| thestonedfox 2007-09-09 ch 1,  | abuseWonderful use of metaphors and parallelism and repetition. Good job :) |
| Lady Patience 2007-09-09 ch 1, | abuseMy x-rays would not be beautiful. You're mad! (But I adore you and love you and want you all the same) |