Cute.

Aw, what an interesting way for a proposal! That's so sweet! Nice job!

"But once you realize you want to spend the rest of your life with somebody, you want the rest of your life to start as soon as possible."

It's from When Harry Met Sally, right? I used them in my wedding invitation.. :)

Oh wow. That was really funny, at the end. Very adorable though. He really is the perfect guy...hm. I wish perfect guy had a name. Anyway, great job! :)

SO CUTE! UGH, I love the fact that she thought he was going to break up with her, but marrying her? WAY far from her list. XD

Very cute!

-Kristy. :) // toffeecakesxox.

well done
=)

D'aw... Again. Ah, well, romance shal always be rmance. But I prefer funny to cheesy, to tell the truth. So if you work on the funny a little bit I'd be extremely happy.

ommgg *squeals. cutest story aww. i love matt and the bit where he'd take the marshmellows how cute.

i love your stories.
and your quote of 'never been kissed'. its my favourite out of that movie.

I loved this! It was cute, and had a back story. Very descriptive, and interesting. I love how your stories have a theme that runs throughout each and everyone of them, in this case, and then he kissed me. Bravo!
Love, Dani (Read my stories! :?)

one word: aw

LOVE IT!

Ri

Cutest thing I've read.

I was kinda sad at the begining but i knew, I could just tell that what was going to happen was going to be the exact opposite of what she thought would happen. lol, great one shot! ~Angela

Aw...this was one of my favorites from all your one-shots! :D I love emotional one-shots! I even cried in this one! :)My other favorite is also Girl X. :)