It's great. I really like it. I'll look for an update, then?

I'm sorry your brothers are such a pain in the ass...but the chapter was good anyway. Helpful Anger Tip: Write a story about you beating them up and being all badass. Whenever they make you angry, reread it to yourself and it'll make you feel better. Plus you don't actually have to beat them up. Fictional violence can accomplish a lot.

But anyway, I like the abrupt plot twists, keep them coming. Right now, I'd say it's at an IL of 8 or maybe 9. (See bio for deatils.) Keep it up, and update asap. :)

Great chapter! This's getting intense. Hopefully your computer survives. I know what that's like - I used to have a story up, but there was something wrong with it so I had to delete it and re-upload it again. But, before I could re-upload it, my computer crashed! RAGE!! So I feel your pain.

And good luck on your exam-thing :)

Sorry I haven't reveiwed in a while - I've got a buncha bits and pieces of a screenplay I'm trying to pull together. It's so frustrating!

Anyway, this is getting pretty good. I'm wondering what happened to Mia and Erika. And I like that you decided to make Tails a margay - those're just too cute!

Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work! ^^

Very good. I'll keep reading when I get the chance.

I just read the entire story in one day! Ah! I love it! It's uber cute and I love the shapeshifting thing... classic. Keep up the amazing work!

I like the plot line a lot, and the descriptiveness is nice. However, I wish you would pick one character to stay in first person on. The way you flip back and forth makes it a tad difficult to read. Other than that, good job.

oh, character development in a nerve-racking subplot-twist. Your mind makes me happy. Write more ASAP por favor. (Ha ha that rhymed)

you've left me on the edge of my seat, i must admit. i was severely frustrated by findout out that there weasnt another chapter, but i understand that it takes time to write. one thing that does bug me however is mix up of homophones, verb tenses, or just small words. Fix those and you're a winner! Anxiously awaiting the next chapter. :)

good plot twists. very well devised.

Very good so far. Good plot lines and well-developed characters. The fighting is well-choreographed and well-thought out. Keep up the good work!

Omg! That ending was so funny Rain (I was serious about calling you that now xP Muahaha)! AND, Nath said "shut up" instead of denying it! So there's gotta be something between them! Well, not NOW but soon xP

You have to do more soon! And if you need any help or anything, like with the whole shape shifting forms thing you were talking about, or anything else, I'm here!

-Katie x

And there is the trouble I knew must come eventually. However, again, great chapter, loved the imagry at the end, and cute the carrying and teasing about the carrying part :cP

Aww :c) So cute. Love the fight! And they really do seem like a nice, close family. But now it seems too good to be true, but Ill have to find out about that later! Sleep calls! But again, great chapter :c)

So what are those two planning? *evil smile* and poor Lance :c( Seems like the world is on his shoulders. But at least hes got Ren. And he likes her *sing song voice* So Im guessing that means romance eventually? Cool that they got a house with electricity and a dojo! And cant wait to see how this snow ball fight turns out >:-] Great job!