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Fractured Illusion 2008-10-18 . chapter 1
What I like most about this piece is probably how alive it feels. The dialog is quirky which I think helps that notion. Not really much actually happens, but you still have it very interesting.

Another thing I adore is the character and character insights. I am a person that enjoys such perspective from "damaged" characters (that aren't victims). They are strong in their oddity, and the way they work together inspires a big "aww" from my side. I can see their bond, even if it is only out of necessity.

“It’s terrible out here. Far too hot. Only wish you’d let us inside sooner.”
Loved how he turned it around =D
You have many quoateble one-liners but giving you more would end up making the review filled with them only, so lets not ^^

Side-note though: Can you be diagnosed for being a sociopath before being an adult? I remember there was a certain time frame set where you couldnt diagnose as such before a certain age, so I am just bringing it to your attention.

I would be very much interested in reading more about their lives :) So please update whenever you can

- Frac (I come in the name of the Review Marathon, link in profile)
Sundown 2007-09-09 . chapter 1
Some really interesting and amusing bits of conversation between the two characters, they have distinct personalities which makes the story readable (trust me, I've read some on here where all the characters seem identical.) Some little confusing bits of information, but I'm unsure whether thats intentional for the work or not, so I'm not going to point them out. Quite fluently written. Overall, I'm intrigued as to where this is going to go!
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