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| Katsaya 2008-05-25 ch 1,  | abuseOnce again... GREAT. I love your poems |
| Thenardier 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful imagery. The description here is so vivid. A nice way to present a sunset. |
| astral boy 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseI liked the classic feel to this, and you didn't slip up... it all seemed perfectly smooth and congruous, and because of that, was a nice read. Thanks for writing, and for the review also. |
| Laura Schiller 2008-03-03 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful and sweet...I didn't know there were still people who wrote in this style. It's like the Romantic era and you pull it off really well. I can just see the sunset and the dreaming girl... |
| kloun doll 2007-12-30 ch 1, | abuseas I read I imagined the scene and the feeling I get is nice, I like the poem 'cause.. I don't know, it's good. |
| Bluorange 2007-09-22 ch 1, | abuseMost rhyming poetry bothers me but this one was just right. I like that you didn't make every line rhyme. Beautiful. :-) |
| Iccle Fairy 2007-09-16 ch 1, | abusereally lovely, such nice imagery and a lovely flow to you're writing! |
| upsidedown.underwater 2007-09-14 ch 1, | abusethat was really pretty, nice job :] |
| BelovedOfAslan 2007-09-12 ch 1, | abuseWonderful atmosphere all throughout. I loved it. |
| Ramenluver 2007-09-09 ch 1, | abuseYou always seem to incorporate the environment in your poems. Maybe you should try to broaden your horizons and try writing poems about specific things. *shrug* Just a suggestion. -Ramen |