the angle on this is quick and cuts home, well done.

mezzie

it's too complex to be simple. christ. i think, my darlin, you have just made it onto my favorites listings.

i like this piece a lot. mostly for the fact that it seems to me that it implies a personal closeness, which isn't as close as previously thought. or something like that. it's still cute, so it's going on my fav stories list, as well as you are going on my author alert list. chuchu~

I really enjoyed the use of the parenthesis and the racy ending. "We're close as sex, which isn't." So beautiful and metaphorical. In most cases I'd say that it seems like you mad it too grammatically sound but it seems like this is how the original came out. For some reason I really do love this a lot though. +Favorite