Man this is deep! I can say no more other wise I'll still be typing in the morning.
-Jenn

oh my this is beautiful. So touching, and so well described. In a way, although I love your writing here, I almost think this would be better if it didn't continue. I does leave a lot to the imagination (what their pasts are, what happened to both of them, what their future will be) but in a way that is where the power comes from.

Some lovely imagery as well. I can't think of any concrit for this, and it gives me a shiver everytime I read that last line :)

How cute! This is a great short story.