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| .theSCREAMINGgoblin. 2008-06-23 ch 1,  | abuseI liked the first paragraph, and lots of people could relate to that ^_^ But the part that really captured me was Haku not being able to answer the question; it was completely realistic, and captured many of the "in class moments" without being cliche. Awesome job! ;D |
| braindead1345 2007-09-25 ch 1, | abuseInteresting...you're going to have to elaborate, thought, I can't tell what it's about just yet. But venture forward, and I'm sure it'll turn out good! |
| kathleen30263 2007-09-09 ch 1, | abuseVery good! |
| InkySubstance 2007-09-09 ch 1, | abuseGood, I really liked the first paragraph. |