Reviews for Of Stolen Kisses and Grape Soda

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insanity-ward 2008-04-15 ch 16,	abuseomg! wow! totally amazing story! i luv it! and i luv the twist you put into it! so amazingly unexpected. Lol! PLZ UPDATE SOON! =]
SillyOme 2008-01-19 ch 16,	abusehm interesting, is the BB guy going to show up, b/c i sorta liked him. update soon
bLuEbEaRgR 2007-12-05 ch 16,	abusethat was great! reply to snowiangelz caz im using my friends to send you the review...if not try the email
Lover of ALL Books 2007-11-27 ch 16,	abuseI don't hate this story but I do agree with you, it is all over the place. Why didn't you just tell us the events in order?
dreamforever101 2007-11-27 ch 16,	abusewow, i am so confused! How old are they?? and i feel like i missed something. When did Katie and Josh get together? why and how? i guess the way you told it suprised me but it seems confusing and it is like u were jumping ahead of yourself. And abt the bathroom incident,josh got revenge on her 4 yrs later when they r in highschool for something that happened in gr. 5! even tho they went to teh same elementary school?!! and he had 4 yrs of being in the same place as her and he didnt get a chance to take revenge?! i think the story has potential but you might want to add more details/plot abt what happens rather than abt incidents that occur after it happens...
starlit x sky 2007-11-26 ch 16,	abuseGreat chapter. Hm, I want to know what happened between Niki and Katie. I wanna see what happens next, so update soon.
anon 2007-11-25 ch 16, anon.	abuseI like this story it is cute, but I think there are holes in between how the couples have gotten together. Also, with the upperclassman that katie kept getting in awkward situations with due to Josh's insistant pranks. Hope to see more though. :) Peace and love hopelessdreamer07
StrawberryKisses08 2007-11-25 ch 16,	abuseNice story, though it was kind of confusing to me how you went from Niki and Katie being best friends to them suddenly being enemies...-.o
Halani 2007-11-25 ch 16,	abuseAW THAT IS SO SWEET! I knew I liked Josh! As for us being disappointed or hating the story. AS IF! This story is awesome and I love it soo much! You rock! And on with my commentary. First of all, I think I know what happened... But I'm not sure. I could be wrong. I am a lot. But maybe I'm right? Maybe not? THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME! Secondly, Lucas and Katie are getting the shame fingers from me. Tsk, tsk. Thirdly, you gots to update soon! I can't wait to see what'll happen. By the way... I LOVE LONG STORIES!! =D -Announcer voice- What happened between Katie and Niki? What will happen with Lucas and Niki? Will Katie and Josh's relationship go on? Tune in next time for another episode! -Halani (I've actually had no sugar today. How sad is that?)
Rhythm.Of.My.Soul 2007-11-25 ch 1,	abuseCute start! I like it!
dreamforever101 2007-11-25 ch 5,	abuseaw.. nice introduction! I like it!! it was really crazy how she's so overprotective about her grape soda! the only constructive criticism i have so far (since Im not done reading the story but this seem like a good time to review) is that you are trying so hard to make them sound like kids. I can see the conscious effort the writer is putting in to make the kids seem more like kids in what is a rather more teen-like situation. Maybe you need to make it seem more naturally kid-like? the statements such as "of course he wasnt thinking this at the time" or "he did not have that knowledge at that time" after you just wrote something that a teen would say (i think) takes away from the story (if they didnt think it, then y mention it!?!) its just one little point so dont worry, i'm just too wordy thats my it seems so long! Anyways, I think its a really interesting story! I cant wait to read more, unfortunatley i have homework, so i shall have to read the rest later... Good work so far tho! and if you have time, can you read/review my story on fp called "First Impressions" and offer me feedback or comments?? Thanks, Dreamforever101
FoxyWriter 2007-11-25 ch 16,	abuseDisappointment? Hating this story? You're crazy ^^ As far as everything goes, I think I understand everything. Let's see if I got this correct... maybe a jealousy game went on and Lucas ended up giving Katie a kiss - Niki saw it, grew furious, and demanded that Katie never even speak with Lucas or Lucas's friends (aka Josh) - and so, when she gets mad at Katie going out with Josh, she makes her feel bad - and eventually Katie breaks up with Josh, and then Katie realizes that it was stupid, and goes back for him, and their (hers and Niki's) friendship ended. However, Niki did get together with Lucas (and something happened, apparently.)I'm curious what'll happen between them now (Niki and Lucas) At any rate, I love this story ^_^ its cute and sweet, and has just enough drama - not too much, not too little - mingled with sufficient humor as well, and overall, I can't wait for the next chappie! ~FoxyWriter
FoxyWriter 2007-11-25 ch 15,	abuseaw so sweet! I love this chapter most, I Think ^_^ perhaps because I love romance stories (especially happy ones) XD! I love this story, so cute and something fun to read xD! wonder what happened between KAtie and Niki though... I'm getting an inclination Katie formed a crush on Lucas, and Niki got mad, or perhaps Niki liked Josh, but Josh loves Katie... omg triangles x_x Anyway, I love the fact Katie and Josh are together! So sweet! :D! ~FoxyWriter
FoxyWriter 2007-11-25 ch 14,	abuseaw so sweet! cant help but to go on to the next chappie xD! ~FoxyWriter
FoxyWriter 2007-11-25 ch 13,	abuseahh I hope Josh and Katie get together - they have that chemistry, I think xD I dunno about the dress though... personally, I like red dresses - that's just me though. Anyway, on to the next chapter :O ~FoxyWriter

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