FictionPress.com - let the words flow
| FictionPress.com - let the words flow |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| no.peace.los.angeles 2007-09-16 ch 1,  | abuseOh, wow, this is gorgeous. As are all your haiku/tanka. I'm always amazed at the images you conjure, and the ease with which your poems flow, even with the oddness of the visuals. This is amazing, as always. "dulled-spice rust" - Oh, that is good. Love it. Beautiful. Keep writing! :) |
| Ashelin 2007-09-10 ch 1, | abuseWhy is this not reviewed? It is so, so, so beautiful. I just love it. I can't even say why. Especially the very last part. So wonderful. Amazing. |