 Lethe's Oblivion 2009-11-13 . chapter 25Just wanted to say I absolutely love your writing. Each time I read a story, I think it's my favorite, and then I read the next one. Your characters are all very real and I really love the way you write them. Amazing work! |
 Arainrhod 2009-10-06 . chapter 25Perfect ending chapter
I've finally finished the whole series... took me awhile too.
But i loved these books... my only problem was keeping track of everyone, especially more minor characters like the brothers and sisters of Amy and Marcus adn all the children of the original characters.
Maybe you could publish a list of some sort... a family tree even.
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Rhoddy |
 Purple Muskrat 2009-09-21 . chapter 25Oh, goodness. What a wonderful ending to a wonderful series. I loved it! I only wish there could have been a bit more of Stasia and Zorin together, especially before she was captured. But it was absolutely delightful. Thank you so much for posting these stories. |
 Purple Muskrat 2009-09-20 . chapter 1I'm terribly intrigued. Xira looks like a wonderful character. I just wanted to point out one minor typo. I wouldn't bother, except that it confused and amused me greatly, not being used to seeing swears in these stories: "As he searched the room for the shit he’d been wearing last night"... |
 Kelly-Green 2009-09-17 . chapter 25Wow, this one was great. At first I was doubtful of a story about Simon, but I ended up loving it. I feel really nostalgic about the Scepter of Light, and it's the one I'm most fond of even though they were all wonderful, The Scepter of Light came first and it'll always be first =]
I'm going to start reading your other series's now, though I'll probably go back and read the first two and the one about Cristi and Marik, I really love Marik.
=) This is all probably boring to you, but I wanted to give some feedback, I apologize if it's a little muddled--it's three in the morning. |
 Reenie 2009-08-17 . chapter 25 And i've finally finished reading the series! I liked this story but not as much as the previous ones, but nonetheless this story was great too. Thank you for finishing the series, it must have taken a lot of determination to get it done. So well done! Your stories are among the best i've read on Fictionpress.=D |
 Tina. 2009-07-08 . chapter 25 Hi! I'm sorry if this ends up being a completely pointless review but I'm hoping it'll be interesting none-the-less. Actually, this is the first review I've ever written. D; I just really needed to let you know that I have read this entire series from start to finish, and although at times I have had to backtrack to a different story simply to get a more insightful grasp at what you had written (Which I usually detest doing, but somehow found it extremely enjoyable to do for these stories) I must say that this has got to be one of the best things I have ever read, published series or not.
You are absolutely amazing as a writer, and you were completely awe-inspiring. Through-out this entire series you constantly managed to inspire me and over half of the time I had this need to try and write my own story. Of course, they never came out very well, but I always had the desire to try.
All in all, I just felt that you needed to know just how much of an inspiration you've been to me, and how I plan on coming back to these stories whenever I feel the need for an extremely good read. [: |
 kazekage13 2009-07-06 . chapter 25Ages don't really matter much.
As far as I can tell, she's younger than Simon, who is probably so I'd place her around a few years older than Cristi, who is probably around Efrem's age or so...yeah.
Anyway, thanks for the reply.
I like this series, especially Shadow Union. |
 kazekage13 2009-07-05 . chapter 23Just...a random question.
How old is Kiska compared to Efrem? |
 Summer Leah 2009-06-29 . chapter 8Wow. I love it. |
 Captured 2009-05-06 . chapter 25 OMG I know it's awful I've read this entire series and I've read the prophecy of nature series and I didn't even review any of your stories. I don't review stories often I'm more of a 'silent reader' but to have only 40 reviews for this entire book is just too evil therefore I'm reviewing...Now that's out of the way...
I love this series really just the way the charachters interact with eachother and how you protray them in the diffrent books and ages they get... I can really believe they would age like that. And THANK GOD that the rape of Kell didn't result in a child I don't think I've ever been so happy... But my favourite character is probably Marik, he's just so innocent it's cute and I LOVE him. From the females I probably like Amy best she reminds me of myself:P.. Well I just wanted to say that i love this world that you've created for them and how you connected Feirtala/Shayark to Galatea it's wonderful. That's all for this story...
Keep on writing I'm definitely going to read all of your stories
Captured |
 Book Enthusiast 2009-03-29 . chapter 16 "Shut up, Amy."
I love Marik. ^_^ |
 Genato 2009-03-27 . chapter 25i love the epilogue. hmm.. you really write good romance stories, the plot and everything. but one thing i don't like that much is your endings. i mean, i'm also a fan of happy endings.. but don't make it too sudden? make it more realistic (although, i know this is a fic nd therefore, it doesn't need to be realistic).. i just want something more believable. it's like, you're tying up the loose ends at the end. i also know that i've told you this before. hehe. but anyways. i really love your stories. please keep writing. :) |
 decadebydecade 2009-01-01 . chapter 25how are you not insane? i would never be able to keep so many characters apart in my head, much less write a story for all of them. and the world they live in! don't even get me started. i loved it. all of it. and i meant to write a review for the first chapter where you introduced Ilana, but i couldn't stop reading, so here it is: that chapter was one of my all time favorites out of this entire series. i have no idea what it was, but the way the chapter was written made me feel like i really understood what kind of character Ilana is (very impressive, considering that was the first look into her head).
ps: alys & will are and probably always will be my favorite couple from this series :) |
 Crentania 2008-12-16 . chapter 25So good! I finished the entire series in a little under a week I think. There were a few errors here and there - the one that sticks out in my head was when Cristi woke up remembering a dream when just a couple chapters before she never remembered a dream. But that could just be attributed to the enormity of the actual dream occurring.
The stories were amazing, and it's always nice to have the perfect happy ending! Thank you so much! |