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| FunkyFlower17 2007-11-02 ch 1,  | abuselol, for some reason the summary reminded me of a song by hilary duff called 'so yesterday'. have u heard of it? the poem does sort of contradict itself, because she's saying she doesnt want him, and then she says she does... but i guess thats the point, and in reality, thats how a person would feel. good job though :) |
| simpleplan13 2007-10-26 ch 1, | abuseI like this... it flows well from your sadness to the facts to the reason for all of it... nicely done |
| someday-i-will 2007-09-25 ch 1, | abuseCaptures the feeling perfectly. |