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| wishing.on.echoes 2007-12-19 ch 7,  | abuseUse spell check. These days there is no excuse for spelling things wrong, even if you're lazy in the extreme word does it for you. |
| ThETrutHAbouTCaseY 2007-12-10 ch 13, | abuseI like it. it flows well and the beat works out well. Have a great week :) |
| Faith Adeline 2007-12-09 ch 15, | abuseAh. . . vampires. Gotta love em. Hah. Great poem, I think you chose a good line to repeat. Good job. |
| Faith Adeline 2007-12-09 ch 14, | abuseThe last stanza of this is my favorite. Great work. Very true also. |
| Faith Adeline 2007-12-09 ch 13, | abuseThis poem is amazing! I love how simple it is, yet it's still jampacked with emotion and realness. :) |
| xDancingintheRainx 2007-11-25 ch 11, | abuseXD That was hilarious. I had to go and look up "enjambment." |
| xDancingintheRainx 2007-11-25 ch 10, | abuseAlso a very well written piece. The imagery is so clear and strong that I feel like I'm there. Terrific work! |
| xDancingintheRainx 2007-11-25 ch 9, | abuseI really like this. Excellent imagery, very descriptive. The last few lines were my favorite. Well done! |
| xDancingintheRainx 2007-11-25 ch 8, | abuseBeing that I can relate extremely well to this piece, it was really intense and piercing. I'm not sure I like this form, but you pulled it off really well anyway. Great descriptions. Very well written. Good job. |
| Faith Adeline 2007-11-25 ch 11, | abusegood job on these. One of my favorite forms of poetry is prose poetry also. I have quite a few on my site (shameless promotion at its best). My favorite has to be "Who I am". Nice job, keep it up! Faith |
| vtcullen 2007-11-25 ch 8, | abuseWhoa, that was good. That picture was creepy. I loved that episode, though. |
| xDancingintheRainx 2007-11-07 ch 7, | abuseThat was a pretty cool piece too. I love how its like a puzzle that you have to put together with words. When you think about it, I guess all poetry is like that, but this piece especially. Nicely done! |
| xDancingintheRainx 2007-11-07 ch 6, | abuseI love this piece. You've done an excellent job with this type of poem. The first two stanzas were my favorite. Amazing job! |
| xDancingintheRainx 2007-11-07 ch 5, | abuseHaha I feel the same way! I wasn't too fond of the form you had to use, it seemed a bit awkward to me, but since it was a school project I guess you really didn't have a choice. The topic was great though. =) Well done. |
| the heather project 2007-11-06 ch 6, | abuseI really love this poem, especially coffee cakes and instant mash, 'cause they're easily the best foods in the world. If you ever find the poem you were supposed to imitate, I'd like to read it as well. |