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Kitsune Luvr 2008-05-24 ch 1, anon.	abuseWow. Just wow. This is so incredibly sweet and wonderful and uplifting and inspiring. Loved it. Your writing is amazing. Can't wait to read more.
Zebbie 2008-04-19 ch 1,	abuseNot sure what I want to say. I really enjoyed this. I liked all the details - how Jackson's lifestyle - the woods, going fishing, reading, make up his personality so convincingly. I like the jealously scene - really well done. I don't know why, but this takes me back to highschool English lessons (in a good way) - Huck Finn (probably because of the fishing) and Of Mice and Men (...not quite sure why). Sweet, but somehow quite dark. I love that he doesn't whine about the unfairness of life. I like how Ken handles the situation - nervous yet calm. Nice playing with who's in control. My only annoyance, which is completely a personal gripe - to me Jacky is a girl's name, so I had and internal 'grr' everytime his nickname came up because it threw his nicely constructed character right off in my head. But that has absolutely nothing to do with your ability as a writer, and it didn't (drastically! :b) diminish my enjoyment of the story. Great work.
nomy 2007-12-26 ch 1,	abuseok...thats so sweet and i love it!the feel of outcast and the feel of love..its just a fairytale story~~..and the ending?? and i thought you going to make a sad ending of that the guy are turning into homophobic or something but it turn but to be just GREAT!! ( the happy ending i mean)..and the MOM knows? you make me happy reading this..like i say "like a fairy tale story"..sweet and real..i cant just stop loving this story!!
Kizuna 2007-10-13 ch 1,	abuseAww, this was such a sweet fic!^__^ I loved it!^__^
Parchment Quill 2007-10-12 ch 1,	abuseI love this story. Definitely a favorite. Showing the two societal wrongs, and religious lines that love takes no heed of. Congratulations, great job.
Sinister Slash 2007-10-05 ch 1,	abuseOh how I love the cousin love. I seriously love every story of yours. Ken and Jackson are so cute together, and they have that "So wrong it's right" kinda relationship. It just proves that love IS everything. Even when related. The ending was perfect. Them finally meeting again, still in love with one another. I was sad that the grandpa died, because even though he wasn't the main character you just made him lovable and excepting. Of jackson, and of the relationship between them that I'm pretty sure he knew. "Werid as a foot fetish" what a funny line! But so true. xD You're thinking about making a book? That idea with the Italian Construction worker and the male belly dancer is brillant! I can't wait to read it, if youe ever post it OR it really does become a book.
Creative Colors 2007-10-05 ch 1,	abuseWow, this is such a great story. Very sweet and lovely.
Bleed The Dream 2007-09-30 ch 1,	abuseThis was so cute! :3 Somehow you manage to make all of the characters you write about different and unique. I admire you for that. Keep on writing! :D
Duzen Broken DreamZ 2007-09-26 ch 1,	abuseI'm sorry it took me forever to read this! This was soo awesome I L O V E it!
the Berserker 2007-09-21 ch 1,	abusegrr! i am SO jealous of you! Why do you write so well? Can I be you? For, like, a day? That would be so awesome. Love this story!
Abstruse Blue 2007-09-19 ch 1,	abuseOmg, I love love love LOVE it too. lolz I greatly enjoyed it! Thank you.
lovelessgirl 2007-09-13 ch 1,	abuseI love it,it made me cry a little but I still love it,your the BEST^.^(oh and thank you again^.^)
LadyFalcone 2007-09-13 ch 1,	abuseI don't usually read one-shots, they're not long enough or detailed enough for me but this was good! I mean it really good, it followed the proper story line and all that so good job.
Mya 2007-09-11 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis is one of those one-shots that has touched my heart Xanthie. >,> I really loved it. I nearly cried at several points and I did shed a few tears for Grandpa. T.T When family is a big part of the story I can always compare it to our family in some way. I can picture Grandpa and Jackson with their quiet, relaxing way of life. (In fact, I always think my house is quiet and somewhat lazy and my friend told me she loves to come over because it feels so uncomplicated) I liked Ken alot, one of the good cousins ^^ I think this story was definately worth the wait~
Miya Morana 2007-09-11 ch 1,	abuseI want to review this, but I don't know what to say. I'm still too much in the story, I guess. It was beautiful. Breathtaking. The way you describe Jackson's feelings, his thoughts, it's incredible. You have rare gift for writing. Thank you for that beautiful story.

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