Woops! Sorry! My sister was logged in on my computer so the last review you received was actually from me, lol

This was the review, btw

One of the sweetest stories I've read in a long, long time.
My favourite part was the understated affection between Jackson and his grandfather. It nearly brought me to tears.

One of the sweetest stories I've read in a long, long time.
My favourite part was the understated affection between Jackson and his grandfather. It nearly brought me to tears.

Um, wow, this is probably the sweetest thing I've ever read. And I'm not shitting you here, this is amazing! Grampa was pretty much the most bad ass character ever, this was a oneshot and I cried when he died! And over all this story was really emotional. It was slow and summery and it completely zenned me out... yea, ok that was a weird comment, but true. Five thumbs up and a popsicle cuz it's summertime :)

oh and ps- I love the idea of a strong bottom/uke/whatever

I don't know why, but I REALLY like this one.
I mean, a lot.

This is quite lovely. It reads like poetry and sunshine.

Wow. Wow. Just . . . wow. This is fantastic. And it actually has a happy ending! I thought it was beautifully written, so heartfelt and sympathetic. I love it!

Beautiful. I love how you portrayed Jack's emotions of being abandoned by his parents. The Grandpa's character was also wonderful, and seemed so real. Great job.

Wow. Just wow. This is so incredibly sweet and wonderful and uplifting and inspiring. Loved it. Your writing is amazing. Can't wait to read more.

Not sure what I want to say. I really enjoyed this. I liked all the details - how Jackson's lifestyle - the woods, going fishing, reading, make up his personality so convincingly. I like the jealously scene - really well done. I don't know why, but this takes me back to highschool English lessons (in a good way) - Huck Finn (probably because of the fishing) and Of Mice and Men (...not quite sure why). Sweet, but somehow quite dark. I love that he doesn't whine about the unfairness of life. I like how Ken handles the situation - nervous yet calm. Nice playing with who's in control.
My only annoyance, which is completely a personal gripe - to me Jacky is a girl's name, so I had and internal 'grr' everytime his nickname came up because it threw his nicely constructed character right off in my head.
But that has absolutely nothing to do with your ability as a writer, and it didn't (drastically! :b) diminish my enjoyment of the story. Great work.

ok...thats so sweet and i love it!the feel of outcast and the feel of love..its just a fairytale story~~..and the ending?? and i thought you going to make a sad ending of that the guy are turning into homophobic or something but it turn but to be just GREAT!!
( the happy ending i mean)..and the MOM knows? you make me happy reading this..like i say "like a fairy tale story"..sweet and real..i cant just stop loving this story!!

Aww, this was such a sweet fic!^__^ I loved it!^__^

I love this story. Definitely a favorite.

Showing the two societal wrongs, and religious lines that love takes no heed of.

Congratulations, great job.

Oh how I love the cousin love. I seriously love every story of yours.

Ken and Jackson are so cute together, and they have that "So wrong it's right" kinda relationship. It just proves that love IS everything. Even when related.

The ending was perfect. Them finally meeting again, still in love with one another. I was sad that the grandpa died, because even though he wasn't the main character you just made him lovable and excepting. Of jackson, and of the relationship between them that I'm pretty sure he knew.

"Werid as a foot fetish" what a funny line! But so true. xD

You're thinking about making a book? That idea with the Italian Construction worker and the male belly dancer is brillant! I can't wait to read it, if youe ever post it OR it really does become a book.

Wow, this is such a great story. Very sweet and lovely.

This was so cute! :3

Somehow you manage to make all of the characters you write about different and unique. I admire you for that. Keep on writing! :D