Reviews for Words can't Pierce the Skin

softer side of apples 2007-11-23 ch 1,	abuseTHIS WAS EXCELLENT...
And FOREVER 2007-11-02 ch 1,	abuseExcellent! This piece is very true - about words molding us into who we are, as much as we all try to hid it. I wish I could write like this..
smile for the sunshine 2007-09-10 ch 1,	abuseAmen. I agree. =)
ThETrutHAbouTCaseY 2007-09-09 ch 1,	abuseI know what you mean, this poem hits home for me. But here's some advice,all the same... 1. show, don't tell 2. pity parties only on special occations 3. vary stentence structure and word choice 4. always read your words out loud 5. a poem only pauses if there is a comma, period, etc (don't forget them, even if you are doing slam poetry) 6. details and images are very important (at least to me) 7. reading will improve your writing 8. editors are devine until #9 is completed 9. writers enjoy killing editors hope this made you smile, keep writing
hateandkill-D 2007-09-09 ch 1,	abuseawsome job on this. i really like it.