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| fatbird33 2008-02-22 ch 1,  | abusei like it. and i love your pen name! |
| Qzie 2007-09-09 ch 1, | abuseOh, man. This nearly made me cry because it reminded me of how one of my best friends left for college, and in a year and a half, another best friend is moving across the country. For such a few words, they make a great impact. Great poem. -Qzie |
| O-o The Orange Moose o-O 2007-09-09 ch 1, | abuseOh, this is beautiful. Simply beautiful. I just... ahh. I can't even have any words to explain it. I love this to pieces. It's so...sweet... :3 Keep writing, this is wonderful. |
| ThETrutHAbouTCaseY 2007-09-09 ch 1, | abusegood, now for some common, tradtional advice... 1. show, don't tell 2. pity parties only on special occations 3. vary stentence structure and word choice 4. always read your words out loud 5. a poem only pauses if there is a comma, period, etc (don't forget them, even if you are doing slam poetry) 6. details and images are very important (at least to me) 7. reading will improve your writing 8. editors are devine until #9 is completed 9. writers enjoy killing editors hope this made you smile, keep writing |