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| madebeautiful 2008-07-11 ch 1,  | abuseThat was really well writen. I liked how you ended it. |
| Ravina 2008-06-21 ch 1, | abuseI'm going to risk sounding cheesy and say this: What IS loaded is this piece of writing. I usually don't read such short pieces, but I'm glad I made an exception with this one. This is definitely going on my favourites! - Rebekah |
| Death Unto Paperclips 2007-09-09 ch 1, | abuseI like this a lot...it just goes to show just how much can happen in a single moment. |