Hm, I wonder where you got the inspiration for this ;P

Good writers write about what they know, and you definitely got across what you felt in the poem. *thumbs up*

Wow. This so exactly sums up how I am feeling about my homework right now.

RULES ALL WRITERS SHOULD KNOW...AND CAN IGNORE:

1. show, don't tell
2. pity parties only on special occations
3. vary stentence structure and word choice
4. always read your words out loud
5. a poem only pauses if there is a comma, period, etc (don't forget them, even if you are doing slam poetry)
6. details and images are very important (at least to me)
7. reading will improve your writing
8. editors are devine until #9 is completed
9. writers enjoy killing editors

hope this made you smile, keep writing