This story was amazing. You really were able to do a good job getting into the mind of someone with schizophrenia. As someone who also suffers from a psychotic disorder (schizoaffective disorder) I was really able to see parts of my own experiences and confusions in the first sister's point of view.

I really hope you write more of this story because it's really well written and gripping.

Very interesting. You really get into character. Sorry for taking so long to R&R. Nice work. Have a fantastic summer.

~Twilight Starr~

Great chapter.

Looking forward to more. :)

~Twilight Starr~

Interesting beginning.

This story has potential.

~Twilight Starr~