This is really well written, it flows nicely =)
You've told the story in just enough words.

now all i want to do is cry
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great story...
very sad

That was really descriptive and emotional- beautiful and sad. I liked it.

Hm..what's with all the death in your stories lately?

It's very good however.
I like how you use that familiar saying at the end.
It was the icing on the cake.

Kudos to you.