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| RebelVampire 2008-04-06 ch 22,  | abuseI read both versions of this story and I love this one...I was very sad when I got to the end of the story...at least they got togather in the end...I would have been mad if he stayed with that other girl or they didnt get togather. |
| N- 2008-02-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseyour work is always beautiful. especially this one. |
| PINKGAZER1990 2008-01-24 ch 22, | abusewow okay i really absolutly positively loved this story i adore the way you wrote it. kept me interested and told the story at the same timee.. very very very good loved it =] |
| Desecrate 2008-01-01 ch 22, | abuseThe end.. ._. But oh, it was awesome. A great read. :] |
| Desecrate 2008-01-01 ch 20, | abuseThe end is near.. :/ |
| Desecrate 2008-01-01 ch 11, | abuseHappy b day, on thae day you posted this. :) Nice chappie. |
| Desecrate 2008-01-01 ch 10, | abusegahaha Thanks, Mike. :] |
| Desecrate 2008-01-01 ch 7, | abuseIm already addicted to this.. |
| Anissa 2008-01-01 ch 6, anon. | abuseDefinately NOT boring. Very compelling |
| heart shaped lies 2007-12-30 ch 22, | abuseI loved how you ended this!! I loved the last line. It gave the title of the story a whole new meaning. Keep it up!! |
| anillo-malvado 2007-12-26 ch 22, | abusethis was really good, but i personally liked "the red lights flying" better. |
| Faith Adeline 2007-12-25 ch 22, | abuseVery good, I liked how this ended. Very...good. Happy holidays! Can't wait to see more from you. Faith |
| Faith Adeline 2007-12-23 ch 21, | abuseThe last line is really good. It really added depth to the poem. Keep up the wonderful work. Faith |
| just give me november 2007-12-23 ch 21, | abusei really liked that last part. "well, it's not who you love first. it's who you love last - who you love the most." |
| the big crunch 2007-12-23 ch 21, | abuseis that it? |