Reviews for When we two parted

Kali Shaelyn 2008-01-09 ch 5,	abuseThat was a certain twist on things... just what is their relationship now? I'm really curious. Thanks for the update and I shall look forward to your next one!
Kali Shaelyn 2008-01-09 ch 4,	abuseNow I feel sorry for Jorge... he seems to be the type of guy who keeps it all inside. However, I could see that they're relationship is taking a turn towards something deeper in friendship? Lol. Nice chapter!
Kali Shaelyn 2008-01-08 ch 3,	abuseLol. Another enjoyable chapter. Jorge fascinates me and I wonder what'll happen in the future as Abril gets to know him better. Keep up the good work and hope to see you at the next update!
Kali Shaelyn 2008-01-08 ch 2,	abuseNice chapter. I think that you've captured the character's very well, they're compelling in their own ways.
Kali Shaelyn 2008-01-08 ch 1,	abuseOh that was a very interesting start, lol, makes me think of embarrassing childhood memories.
LOTRMS 2007-09-09 ch 1,	abuseI really liked the line about the fiberglass yellow brick road, you paint a realistic view of highschool. Keep up the good work! -LOTRMS