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Reviews For: When we two parted

Kali Shaelyn
2008-01-09
ch 5,
abuseThat was a certain twist on things... just what is their relationship now? I'm really curious.

Thanks for the update and I shall look forward to your next one!
Kali Shaelyn
2008-01-09
ch 4,
abuseNow I feel sorry for Jorge... he seems to be the type of guy who keeps it all inside.

However, I could see that they're relationship is taking a turn towards something deeper in friendship? Lol. Nice chapter!
Kali Shaelyn
2008-01-08
ch 3,
abuseLol. Another enjoyable chapter. Jorge fascinates me and I wonder what'll happen in the future as Abril gets to know him better. Keep up the good work and hope to see you at the next update!
Kali Shaelyn
2008-01-08
ch 2,
abuseNice chapter. I think that you've captured the character's very well, they're compelling in their own ways.
Kali Shaelyn
2008-01-08
ch 1,
abuseOh that was a very interesting start, lol, makes me think of embarrassing childhood memories.
LOTRMS
2007-09-09
ch 1,
abuseI really liked the line about the fiberglass yellow brick road, you paint a realistic view of highschool.

Keep up the good work!
-LOTRMS
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