That was a certain twist on things... just what is their relationship now? I'm really curious.

Thanks for the update and I shall look forward to your next one!

Now I feel sorry for Jorge... he seems to be the type of guy who keeps it all inside.

However, I could see that they're relationship is taking a turn towards something deeper in friendship? Lol. Nice chapter!

Lol. Another enjoyable chapter. Jorge fascinates me and I wonder what'll happen in the future as Abril gets to know him better. Keep up the good work and hope to see you at the next update!

Nice chapter. I think that you've captured the character's very well, they're compelling in their own ways.

Oh that was a very interesting start, lol, makes me think of embarrassing childhood memories.

I really liked the line about the fiberglass yellow brick road, you paint a realistic view of highschool.

Keep up the good work!
-LOTRMS