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| Vippy G 2008-03-03 ch 3,  | abuseOh, another good chapter. I'm definitely intrigued by the Sona character, and the history teacher. Quick Q: Eighth last and twelfth last paragraphs, the dialougue says "I", so is that Sona or the 'Oddball" saying that? Just a little confused... Anywho, excellent chapter and excellent story. I look forward to reading more! |
| Vippy G 2008-03-03 ch 2, | abuseOh, another good chapter. Actually, you did a very good job of mixing the "rules of the universe" in with the plot of the chapter. Very impressive! |
| Vippy G 2008-03-03 ch 1, | abuseInteresting beginning. An intersting insight in the main character's mind. Very nice. |